Writer: Dan Slott
Penciler: Marcos Martin
Inker: Marcos Martin
Story Title: Mysterioso Part 1: Murder Un-Incorporated
Plot
Death in the Mafia Family. Spider-Man helps the bad guys. May and Jay return. Aunt May’s awful discovery. Return of the villain. Back from the dead. May’s attitude changes.
The Commentary
Here’s the great thing about Spider-Man; he’s a versatile character. You can do slam bang super-hero stories with him and it works. You can also do more street level, crime stories with him and it still works even with his powers and abilities. I like the crime dramas or at least the crime dramas I’ve read.
The thing is I really wasn’t wowed by Slott bringing back the street level characters to this title. Plotting wise this issue was pretty tight. There was a large cast of characters and Slott kept it all together and managed to throw in a few curve balls here and there that I wasn’t really expecting. I didn’t like them necessarily but on an overall story level it was solid.
The main problem and where I start disliking the issue and quite possibly the story is that while there are all these neat elements I don’t really care about them. Nothing in the writing grabbed me as a reader and the introduction of Mysterio was very dull and uninteresting. It’s kind of neat that he faked the deaths of all of these mafia guys but it just wasn’t as exciting and I think it was meant to be. I realize that this is the first chapter of a story arc but I didn’t really care for it.
And then there’s Aunt May’s role in the story. I am pretty much sick of seeing Aunt May looking at Peter as if he was a moronic nine year-old. The whole Peter driving thing with May and Jay being scared in the backseat was not funny at all and just annoyed the crap out of me. Then again outside of Brian Michael Bendis, JMS and J.M. DeMatteis’ handling of the character I have consistently hated Aunt May throughout Spider-Man’s history. The fact that she was taken over by Mr. Negative and told Peter off was also rather annoying and I am going to make the prediction that it really won’t go anywhere and will continue to annoy me as long as the sub-plot continues.
Parting Thoughts
Between the general direction of the story and the art I wasn’t very impressed with this issue. This story has some potential and I did like seeing the return of Silvermane and Hammerhead but everything else just left me cold. Slott has proven to be a good writer, just not on this issue.
2 out of 5 webheads.
Gotta say I’ve been enjoying this story so far. Slott’s the only BND writer I can stomach.
@Spider-Dad: You need a different license to drive a motorcycle. It’s possible that Peter has a motorcycle license and not a standard vehicle license.
Incidentally, you also need another separate license to drive a motorcycle with a sidecar. That’s why Schwarzenegger got into trouble a few years ago after his minor accident — he has a motorcycle license, but he didn’t have one to drive a motorcycle with a sidecar.
Spider-Dad, Conway had him mention the motorcycle. When the Human Torch asks him about his driving, he says “the closest I ever got to wheels was a motorcycle I used to own.”
I agree, this issue was” meh” wasn’t horrible, but not as good as the Rhino issue.
Michael, the whole Peter driving bit is probably a homage to Peter being a poor driver. During the Gerry Conway era it was established that Peter really never got a driver’s license. (Huh? You might recall he had a motorcycle during the Lee age, just go with it…). Anyway, from time to time they allude to this running gag that Peter just can’t drive. Get it? He can do all these Amazing Spider-Man bits, but his driving totally sucks. OK, it’s not that great of a gag, but they even did it in Spider-Man III with his motorcycle getting trashed…so, I’ll give Slott a pass on this one…
WordPress has a ping back thing so if a post is linked to on another site or blog a comment is automatically sent here. I took care of it so that should take care of the issue. Sorry, Any Wheatcakes.
Thats true. Aunt may is very bad written by everyone except bendis and JMS (i havent read a lot of dematteis). And with this shit of BND, we lost a very funny character in the wat JMS wrotte about this woman. She was very interesting to read but now we have that fucking old granny that everyone hate.
Huh? What does the first comment mean?