by Spideydude » Sat Feb 19, 2005 1:54 pm
by K-Cee » Wed Feb 23, 2005 2:59 am
by Spideydude » Tue Mar 01, 2005 10:00 pm
K-Cee wrote:A nice finish to <i>New Dawn</i>. I like the way you use the dialogue and event descriptions to put different character viewpoints into the story. One thing, though, I get confused of who's who, and what's going on. Were the CSA captured, only to escape? Or were they set free? Where is everybody going, and why? Heh, I guess I need to be spoonfed, I can't figure out things for myself at this! The story is good, regardless.
Thanks for keeping it up!
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