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by MadGoblin » Mon Jul 19, 2010 1:07 pm
by black suit spiderman » Mon Jul 19, 2010 1:32 pm




by Funnykay » Mon Jul 19, 2010 2:48 pm

by Venomaniac » Mon Jul 19, 2010 2:48 pm
There's a moment here which is a nice piece of writing, which would actually work if it wasn't for the fact that it completely undermines everything about Peter Parker and Spider-Man as a character. I refer, of course, to the moment where he strips off the mask and says that its not Spider-Man that's there to kill Fisk, but Peter Parker.
There was once a time when Straczynski seemed to have a real handle on Peter Parker, in terms of how he operates, who he was with the mask on and off, and the humor of the character. However, if this was the only issue by Straczynksi that you ever read, you would have no idea that he ever understood who Peter Parker is as a character. This is dreadful trash. Peter Parker would NEVER act like this, not like this. I've read Peter Parker's problems with anger in light of disaster before, such as fighting the Green Goblin after Gwen's death, fighting Chameleon in Pursuit, fighting Norman Osborn in any of their myriad fights post-Clone Saga, and at least in all those instances Peter Parker was still in there, could still be seen, and the writing made it all seem more legitimate. But here, the characterization is so over the top to show Peter as bloodthirsty and full of revenge that I found it almost disturbing. The story itself, the fight sequence, the dialogue with Kingpin, its interesting, it makes sense and it works, but not for Spider-Man to be saying those words.
This just doesn't feel like Peter Parker in any way, shape, or form. Aunt May would be disgusted and embarrassed by his behaviour.




by MadGoblin » Mon Jul 19, 2010 4:32 pm
Venomaniac wrote:Spiderfan.org's take on Peter's fight with Fisk:There's a moment here which is a nice piece of writing, which would actually work if it wasn't for the fact that it completely undermines everything about Peter Parker and Spider-Man as a character. I refer, of course, to the moment where he strips off the mask and says that its not Spider-Man that's there to kill Fisk, but Peter Parker.
There was once a time when Straczynski seemed to have a real handle on Peter Parker, in terms of how he operates, who he was with the mask on and off, and the humor of the character. However, if this was the only issue by Straczynksi that you ever read, you would have no idea that he ever understood who Peter Parker is as a character. This is dreadful trash. Peter Parker would NEVER act like this, not like this. I've read Peter Parker's problems with anger in light of disaster before, such as fighting the Green Goblin after Gwen's death, fighting Chameleon in Pursuit, fighting Norman Osborn in any of their myriad fights post-Clone Saga, and at least in all those instances Peter Parker was still in there, could still be seen, and the writing made it all seem more legitimate. But here, the characterization is so over the top to show Peter as bloodthirsty and full of revenge that I found it almost disturbing. The story itself, the fight sequence, the dialogue with Kingpin, its interesting, it makes sense and it works, but not for Spider-Man to be saying those words.
This just doesn't feel like Peter Parker in any way, shape, or form. Aunt May would be disgusted and embarrassed by his behaviour.
Your thoughts?
by Hobo-Goblin » Mon Jul 19, 2010 4:54 pm

by CrazyChris » Mon Jul 19, 2010 6:41 pm


by MadGoblin » Mon Jul 19, 2010 8:23 pm
CrazyChris wrote:One place where I think you're being a little unfair is in this sentence: "no responsible adult puts his family in harms way because his conscience bothers him over the perceived “mistreatment” of poor little psychotics in prison." Your characterization makes it sound like Peter's some bleeding heart protesting that the government is fluffing the pillows in Bulleyes prison cell enough. First of all, the people being locked up weren't psychotics, they were mostly do-gooders who didn't want to be forcibly conscripted into SHIELD and have their private information on a government registry just because they happen to be different. Also, "perceived 'mistreatment'" is an understatement. The unregistered heroes were being isolated in a dystopian supermax facility in a dimension that literally drains hope from human souls until they are driven mad. And the prisoners were not even given a trial or any sort of due process, so one can't claim they were reaping the fair consequence of breaking the law because the whole imprisonment system they were using was itself unlawful. Whether or not a "reasonable adult" would endanger his family to rebel against that system is a fairly debatable point, but in my opinion your wording doesn't do the dillema justice.
by black suit spiderman » Mon Jul 19, 2010 8:53 pm




by MadGoblin » Mon Jul 19, 2010 9:05 pm
black suit spiderman wrote:JR is back!
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by Shadow116 » Mon Jul 19, 2010 9:14 pm




by black suit spiderman » Tue Jul 20, 2010 10:32 am
MadGoblin wrote:black suit spiderman wrote:JR is back!
Love that Goblin picture!
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