spidertour02 wrote:
Now, look at the cover for the as-yet-unreleased Crawl Space Avengers #8:
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by Spideydude » Sun Jul 03, 2011 10:12 pm
spidertour02 wrote:
Now, look at the cover for the as-yet-unreleased Crawl Space Avengers #8:




by DarkKnightJared » Mon Jul 04, 2011 3:02 pm
spidertour02 wrote:I'm not trying to be mean, but there is little to nothing in your style that works. Your anatomy in particular is awful, in terms of both body shapes and poses. Take it from somebody that's been there (and is still there, in many ways) -- you need to accept that you have a long way to go and start looking for help. The first thing to do is stop trying to color these pieces and just focus on tightening up your anatomy. A couple of books that will be very helpful are the classic How To Draw Comics The Marvel Way by Stan Lee and John Buscema and another favorite of mine, Drawing Cutting Edge Anatomy by Christopher Hart. These two books focus on comic book anatomy, which is of course a departure from realistic human anatomy. To get a better understanding of more realistic human anatomy, head over to Barnes & Noble and check out their art section. There are dozens of books that collect quality images of models of all shapes and sizes that you can use as reference.
spidertour02 wrote:Do you block in the shapes first, or do you dive right in to the linework? At this stage, you should be focusing on getting your blocking correct to maintain correct proportions. I look at this Catwoman drawing and get the impression that you didn't block out the figure, causing you to run out of space and compress her legs to fit on the page. I used to do this all the time until I finally changed my habits and started blocking extensively. I can even prove this with a couple of cover examples.
spidertour02 wrote:The point of this little exercise is that these drawings were only done about four years apart, but they are practically the work of two different artists. You can get better, and you will get better, if you strip your style back down to basics and rebuild it from the ground up.


by Cbasfrench » Mon Jul 04, 2011 7:17 pm


by DarkKnightJared » Tue Jul 05, 2011 6:54 pm






by spidertour02 » Thu Jul 07, 2011 2:16 pm
DarkKnightJared wrote:




by DarkKnightJared » Thu Jul 07, 2011 9:26 pm
spidertour02 wrote:Well, here's your problem -- this wireframe has some significant anatomical issues. The biggest issue is that you drew his upper legs too short. The upper leg of a human is longer than the lower leg. (In fact, the femur is the largest bone in the human body.) This is commonly exaggerated in comic book anatomy, though they went a bit overboard with this in the 90s. Some artists even draw the upper leg to be about the same length as the torso. Here's an example from my work:
Check out Mayday's legs. (No, not like that, you creepers.) The length of the upper leg from the hip to the knee is longer than the length of the lower leg from the knee to the ankle. The upper leg is also roughly the same length as the distance from her waist to her clavicle. This is done more or less by feel rather than by measurement -- I'm not a big proponent of head counting and such, choosing instead to rely on my instincts as far as proportion goes.
spidertour02 wrote:Another notable problem with the legs you drew is that you don't properly taper around the knees and ankles, making his legs unnaturally chunky. You need to taper the lower leg into the ankle a bit more to correct the problem. Using your system of ovals, drawing an oval for the calf and a separate block for the shin might alleviate the problem. The ankle is one of the flimsiest joints on the human body -- don't be afraid to draw some sissy-looking ankles on male figures. I did it with this drawing of the Silver Surfer, and it actually works.
spidertour02 wrote:This post is already getting too long, so we'll get into more later -- I have one other major discussion to write about the finished drawing. I hope this helps so far.


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by spidertour02 » Sat Jul 30, 2011 10:31 am
Cbasfrench wrote:My latest, in honor of the new movie.
by tnr105 » Sat Jul 30, 2011 3:45 pm
Cbasfrench wrote:My latest, in honor of the new movie.


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