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30 Years Later... A spider-Man fan story

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30 Years Later... A spider-Man fan story

Postby asbestos man » Fri Nov 14, 2008 10:16 am

NOTE TO MODERATORS: As I was unaware of the correct forum for this, please feel free to move it to where you consider it most appropriate!

Introduction
As long as I have been reading comics I have despised Marvels 'floating timeline' and its tendency to distort the lives of its characters, and weaken the decades long narrative, as well as the many 'ret cons' that have accomplished the same. The recent Marriage annullment in the current issues of Amazing Spider-Man was the end for me. It was the final abandonment of any pretense that the Spider-Man saga is the story of a man's life. With that I have finally lost interest

Personally, my favorite Spider-Man era has always been the 60s and 70s.

With that in mind I decided that I wanted to tell the story of what happened to the Spider-Man of those early 60s and 70s Stan Lee and Gerry Conway issues. I wanted to treat Peter Parker as a real person and that got me wondering what kind of psychological effect the things that happened to him in those early issues might have had on a real young man and what might have become of him later in life.

This story is based on the events of the first 150 issues of Amazing Spider-man. (The whole of the Stan Lee and Gerry Conway runs) It is set in the present by which time the events of those issues lie over 30 years in the past. Of course those issues span a publishing period of 13 years but only six or seven years of the Wall Crawlers life. I therefore haven't been able to shake the sliding timeline curse entirely. Nevertheless I have tried to tie events to specific dates, even if that means pushing them a couple of years away from when the comics in which they occur were published.

This story DOES involve clones, but as it is based solely on spider-Man comics published up to 1975 it will be ignoring the 90s clone saga mess entirely.

Future installments will be less depressing, feature more action, and spend less time wallowing in the back issue bin. They will also feature the return of many old characters, both from the Spider-Man titles and from the wider marvel universe and show what they have been up to these past thirty years.

Incidentally this is my first attempt at fan fiction. Comments and criticisms are very welcome!
As I didnt grow up in New York (or in the 1960s) pointers towards any errors as regards time and place are particularly appreciated. I also want to express my own appreciation of J. Fettinger of 'Spidey Kicks Butt' fame whose scholarly Spidey-artciles have been an inspiration to me.
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Postby asbestos man » Fri Nov 14, 2008 10:21 am

37 Years Later...
A Spider-Man Tale
by J 'Asbestos Man' Thomas


Based on the characters and stories created by Stan Lee, Roy Thomas and Gerry Conway and other members of the Mighty Marvel Bullpen.


Book One: City of Ghosts

Chapter One: Meet The Mets


2008

On a gray overcast November afternoon a slim man stands in Rooseveldt Avenue, looking at Shea Stadium. He is wearing dark blue jeans, a plain baseball cap and a brown leather jacket, the collar turned up against the cold. A black rucksack is slung across his back. His face still remains youthful and only the wisps of gray in his hair and beard give a hint of his age.

“Has it really been almost 40 years since I left New York? I never thought I'd come back. Especially to this spot. Was it a mistake? No... I set out to exorcise some ghosts and this is as good a place to begin as any. They are tearing this place down now so I guess this was the last chance”


As he gazes up at the condemned structure, the memories come flooding back.

“Game 5 of the '69 Series. Looking back, that might have been the best time of all. Death, darkness and tragedy were right around the corner. Those memories will haunt me forever. But when I look for comfort amid the sea of ghosts, for a port in the storm, I often think of that day...”


1969
Peter Parker, Gwen Stacey, and Harry Osborn are in a crowded ballpark, sitting behind home plate. In front of them, Frank Robinson is taking batting practice, swatting linedrives into the stands.

Mary Jane: These seats are the living end Harry !

Harry: We've had them since the Mets started playing. My dad has been friends with the Sheas since before I was born...

Gwen: Look! Over there!. Coming out of the dugout!

PA Announcer: Tonights first pitch will be thrown by, living legend of World war II, Sentinel of Liberty, and Avenger Captain America!

Captain America trots out to the pitchers mound. He is wearing a Mets warmup jacket over his red white and blue costume.

Peter Parker starts snapping away with his camera.
Peter: The Bugle will love this!

MJ (to Gwen): He is gorgeous, look at those shoulders!

Flash Thompson: And old enough to be your father! If its a real American hero you're looking for ladies, you got one right here! I come bearing gifts!

Flash Thompson pushes past the crowd toward his friends. He is dressed in an army uniform, but has replaced his cap with a Mets hat. He is carrying sodas and hot dogs in both arms.

Flash Thompson (to Peter): Quit snapping away shutterbug! If you wanted to watch everything through your viewfinder you could have stayed with your TV back home!

“It was an incredible game of course. When Ron Swoboda drove in the winning run in the eighth, the place erupted. We were leaping out of our seats, laughing, hugging shouting. Gwen never looked more beautiful than on that day, her face flushed with excitement, the sun glinting off her golden hair. I have a mental snapshot of her that day, standing there with her arms raised, radiant in the moment.

And Harry. The Osborn name carried so much weight in New York back then. Harry actually managed to get us into the Mets front office party after the game. When I think of Harry now, I often think of what happened to him later. The drugs, the mental illness and the final tragic end. But on that day he was in his element. To a working class kid from queens like me, he looked like the hero in a Fitzgerald story as he strode through the sea of the beautiful and the famous shaking hands, telling jokes, every inch the Osborn heir. Flash Thompson was a kid in a candy store, bouncing around the room like a pinball and making me take pictures. Flash with Casey Stengel. Flash with Tom Seaver, Flash with Bill Shea. And of course Gwen and MJ charmed the whole place. I could have felt like a fish out of water but I was carried along on a wave of their enthusiasm. It was the one of the last times we were all happy and carefree together. A little while later Gwens father died, Flash went back to Viet Nam and Harry's drugs problems began.

But nothing can erase that perfect day.

Not even what happened here afterward...

On this very spot... "


1971
The Scene shifts, We are still in Shea but it is night time... Lying on the pitchers mound are two men in Spider-Man costumes... Tied to the Score board is the bound and gagged body of Bugle reporter Ned Leeds. A ticking bomb is strapped to his chest. Squatting in the stands is a man in a Jackal costume, cackling, fiendishly. And beside him... Gwen Stacey

It was a clone of course. 'Just a clone', an exact genetic double spawned from the Jackals lab, but real none the less. As flesh and blood as me, with all of Gwens memories intact.

And was Miles Warren under that rubber Jackal mask. My biology professor at ESU and insane as it turned out,. Also spare-time scientific genius. He realized what he had done in the end. The 'clone'... Gwen made him see what an evil monster he had become. Thats what saved Ned in the end. Meanwhile I was engaged in a fruitless slug-festwith my own clone on the pitching mound.

What is ironic is that for all his machinations, in the end Professor Warren just wanted to be loved... What bitter loneliness there must have been hidden under those layers of brilliance and madness. Like a modern day Pygmalion he built a woman to love him, a sculpture of mind body and soul. I can't imagine his final seconds of despair when he threw himself onto the bomb meant for Ned Leeds. When his own creation, the woman born to love him rejected him.

That day was the end for me. The end for Spider-Man really.

I remember back in my senior year of High school when Quentin Beck.-That nutcase with the fishbowl on his head calling himself Mysterio- tried to convince me I was insane. NOTHING in his bag of Hollywood tricks came close to 1971 for sheer craziness.

'71 finally made me turn my back on the insanity.. It was just too much...

My best friend overdosed on drugs... The was the beginning of the end for Harry if we'd only known it.
Could I have helped him? I don't know... Harry was driven by demons of his own long before he inherited those of his father...

Then the girl I loved died on the Washington Bridge... Murdered by the father of that same best friend. Maybe it was Norman the Goblin that pushed her but she was really killed by her connection to Spider-Man. To me. Normans poisonous legacy should have died with him right there after he was killed by his own Goblin glider but of course it was not to be.

Aunt May fell in love and almost married Otto Octavius... She was a sick lady by then although I refused to see it. I was on the verge of breakdown myself at that point. The doctors say that her condition would have been untreatable anyway. I can't help thinking though... What if I had noticed sooner? Could something have been done? If I had spoken to Reed Richards or Doctor Connors... who knows?

By the time Harry Osborn had another breakdown and came for me wearing the costume of his father and my girlfriends killer, my own sanity was hanging by a thin thread.

But Gwen...
Gwen coming back was the straw that broke the camels back...


To Be Continued...
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Postby Funnykay » Fri Nov 14, 2008 11:06 am

Good stuff here. So I take it the events mentioned when the Jackal is in Shea Stadium are all in 71?
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Postby asbestos man » Fri Nov 14, 2008 11:25 am

yeah I have the events of ASM 150 occuring in '71. Not a perfect fit, as there are still discrepancies here and there, but the best I could do when you consider that ASM 28-150 all have to occur within a four year span. Thanks for reading! This is still a first draft and there are aspects I am unhappy with (Peter Parker's inner monologue sounds a little stilted here and there even for a much older versionfor instance) but I hope to iron out those problems as I go. I appreciate the feedback.
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Postby Shadow116 » Fri Nov 14, 2008 5:44 pm

Even for a rough draft this is excellent, keep up the good work. [smilie=spidey_clap.gif]
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Re: 30 Years Later... A spider-Man fan story

Postby brad000123 » Mon Oct 01, 2012 11:20 pm

appreciable 1st attempt not bad dude , keep it up




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Re: 30 Years Later... A spider-Man fan story

Postby nuten » Wed Feb 27, 2013 4:33 am

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